Monday, February 7, 2011

Chase-the sequel


The moon was hiding behind the clouds, peeping out occasionally to make sure that it wasn't missing out on something interesting

 I was sitting in front of a computer screen showing complicated screens with important data popping out in regular intervals. My eyes were tiring out; red threads were creeping into the white of my sleep deprived eyes.
"Dude I am hungry" K.D said
“same here, let’s go to some tapri"
“Are you done with your work?"
"Nopes, but if I don't take my eyes off this screen for now then I will never finish it"
“Alright, btw you have cash?” KD asked
“No, but I will withdraw it from some ATM nearby”
“Cool”

Since the evolution of man, very few friendships have lasted the test of time.  Today, one such friendship will be tested.

KD kicked start his bike, making the only noise in the huge parking lot and drove out. The weather outside the office was different. There was a slight breeze along with a chill in the air. The breeze massaged my tired eyelids. I was losing the fight of staying up when KD stopped on a corner.

He pointed towards the ATM at the other side of the road. When I saw the ATM for the first time, I knew it was different, but I thought common sense took over me and I started to cross the road. I stood at the divider checking for any cars, there was a chill which ran down my spine. I thought I heard something but wasn’t sure. For the second time in these few minutes I did not listen to my senses, a fact that I regret.

I crossed the road and was just about a few steps away from the ATM when I was sure I sensed an old enemy. The growl was there, and the enemy decided to let go of a bark. My walk turned into a sprint to the ATM, and the old enemy was a few steps behind me. The door of the ATM was too heavy for the enemy. I stood behind those heavy doors safe but I knew that this couldn’t go on forever. I had to start looking for an exit but there was none in sight.

127 seconds to go

“Why was it chasing you?”KD shrieked
“I don’t know man, but you got to help me man”
“That thing looks ferocious”

100 seconds to go

KD called again
“That thing isn’t moving”
“I can see that”
“We need to distract it”
“I will throw a stone or something, you run and jump on my bike”


80 seconds to go

I pushed the door as slightly as ever waiting in anticipation of KD’s move.  I couldn’t go more than a step outside; the stone couldn’t really distract it. It only made it turn away and it saw its victim trying to step out and in an instant jumped.

I pushed the door back, it collided with the door and still growling. I could see those teeth grinding against each other in anticipation of the victim, and those eyes never let go of the victim.

I was starting to lose hope.

60 seconds to go

“What is that noise?” the security guard inside the ATM asked rubbing his eyes
I explained him my situation.  He rushed into the small cabin masked behind the machine. I thought I had lost my only hope. But that’s what I thought.

30 seconds to go

He came out with a huge stick and rushed outside towards the enemy
“Madar****” he shouted at the enemy, letting go a blow at the enemy. The enemy resisted for once but started to back track. I saw my opportunity; I rushed outside the ATM and ran across the street towards KD. He had kick started his bike already. On my way, one leg got into the way of the other and I fell. But the enemy was nowhere to be seen. This was to be continued for later.

They say that it is man’s best friend, but after my ordeals I have come to doubt it. When old friendships were tested, a hero was born.

I was sitting behind KD and watching my hero light a beedi on the stairs of the ATM. I don’t know how things would have been had it not been for his heroic act.

 The moon was clear of the clouds, I am sure. 

EPILOGUE:
"Dude did you withdraw some money?" KD asked


Footnotes:
This is my hundredth post on my blog. I thought of writing some ode to myself but I guess the best way to do it is by doing it the way I know best.

For those who don't know about "The Chase" click here



13 comments:

Rumya said...

Loved the way you opened the story, Shahid.

The moon was hiding behind the clouds, peeping out occasionally to make sure that it wasn't missing out on something interesting.

Those lines almost seem poetic.
And congratulations on reaching one hundred posts. Do keep writing.

Shady West Side said...

Thanks Rumya...I need to treasure you now considering the fact that you are my only reader :-)

Jon said...

That was along innings to hundred..but every one of ur post was simply awesome... Keep tht goin!



This story was very good too!

Suruchi said...

Hi Shahid,
Congratulations of the 100th post...
This is a superbly fitting ode
Very gripping start and edgy throughout:-)
Keep writing:-)

Shady West Side said...

Thanks jon...I must say somewhere you have contributed in me continuing...i must thank you ppl


@suruchi: thanks and do keep coming back to the blog.I will try and not disappoint

Purba said...

Dogs love you don't they. Loved the gripping narrative and the sense of humour.

Sadiya Merchant said...

funny!
happy 100...candles....tadaaa! :)

Shady West Side said...

@ Purba: yes they do

@sadiya: Thanks

Explorer said...

great post bhai..hope he doesnt find you out again near some atm... ;)
doesnt seem that you would like another post about villian here..

A Great Liar said...

Hi, first time here. Enjoyed reading your post.
You have got a nice blog, pal. Following it.

Anonymous said...

funny...i hope the dog finds bijoy and tears him apart

Shady West Side said...

@bijoy: thanks for reading and keep coming back to my blog. I hope I can write more posts on the villian

@Great Liar: I saw your blog,you've got a gr8 one too

@anonymus: I wonder who you are

Anonymous said...

bro its awesome................
congrats for ur 100 post........and keep doing and give us new new thing to read and enjoy....