Friday, November 6, 2009

Distance- A poem By Chandni Bahl

I have caught someone on a sting camera, not exactly but am posting a poem written by a good friend of mine, Chandni. Chandni is a writer and it seems she hasn't written anything in a long long time! So I decided why not give her the spark,and lets see where she goes from here.She doesnt know about this so this will be a surprise and thats why I said I have caught her in a sting operation.
Here is a poem by her, so friends tell her what you think about it












Distance Between 2 people

To realize the importance of someone
And know how much you love them

Not being able to see them everyday and
Missing the smallest things about them

Thinking about them every hour
Hoping that the time would fly

Crossing out 'blue' days on the calendar
Writing LONG letters as the days pass by

watching the moon for hours hoping they are doin the same
Every moment Wishing that- This DISTANCE never existed..

14 comments:

sumedha said...

see i told you..!u are an amazing writer channi..!!nd ur poems deserve to be read..!they are worth it !!:)

Shady West Side said...

Even I love the poem...wonderful

Neeraj Shinde said...

I am sure such writeups are difficult to be framed if the person is not in love! An awesome expression of love!

Devika Jyothi said...

Yes, its a nice, straight from the heart poem...Chandni, i feel should be writing, (and reading) more and more and more :)

and You are beautiful, Chandni :)

Shahid...a nice gesture :)

wishes,
devika

runnerfrog said...

Thanks, it's a nice piece on something painful and hard to manage.

Anya said...

Very touching poem
I love it :-)
Thanks for sharing !!

Anonymous said...

Lovely emotions nicely penned...a good write.

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Like i said, perhps one of the most addressable issues on people! A very well written piece!

Shilpa Garg said...

That's a nice way to bring out your friend from hibernation! A very sweet gesture, Shahid! :)

And Chandni, that's a very poignant expression!
Keep expressing!! :)

Jeevan said...

She beautifully expressed her longing gesture. I wish she writes more and what she write here is simply sweet.

Old Monk said...

Chandni,that was simply superb.You have the passion,feeling and imagination which a poet requires.Simple and beautiful expression. I am firmly of the opinion that you should continue writing poems. Don't let anything stop you.Thank you Shahid for introducing this poetess to us .... not forgetting Rakesh.

man in painting said...

nice poem
tell her to write more.
cheers!

Vishwanath Seshadri said...

Lovely poem.. Straight from the heart...

If one is immersed
in the thoughts of someone
they are never separate...
they are together...
they are one....
neither time nor distance
can ever separate them...

cheers !!

Seema Syed said...

A very impressive gesture to support your friend for her very well written poem. This shall encourage her a lot. lovely poem fromyour friend