This is my first attempt at 55-fiction. I was highly inspired after reading a few of them, this kind of writing is here to stay, So well this is me jumping into the bandwagon
It was like every other holiday, mom and dad packed their bags.
Mom was loud as usual, and Dad never cared to listen.
We went to the airport and scanned the luggage.
They never kissed, never said Good Bye, not a word shared .
My mom held my hand and they walked separate ways.
6 comments:
Good one Shahid. Has a deeper thought and meaning!!
Keep expressing!!
Apologies, I forgot to answer about your request on your comment on my blog!! :P
PS : I always wonder about your blog url!!
well, it was an accident, a huge huge accident, I will surely not tell anyone about it...:-P,
but thanks, I am glad u liked it...I will try and write more of these
Man! This kinda moved me!!!!! U sure are a tale weaver!!!!!
what do i say.... i think its pretty different..and i like it....bingo..wld like to read more of these.:)
As I have commented before for your older posts, you tailor your thoughts perfectly. As usual, quite emotional thoughts.
Keep going.
@ Rakesh, thanx man...I need to improve a lot man but I will accept the tag
@ Swati, I will try and write more, and try not to dissapoint
@ Seema, ppl not think I am emotional, and call me confused, Guess my writing is diff to what i am
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